vgmaster831
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May 22, 2009 0:45:31 GMT -5
Post by vgmaster831 on May 22, 2009 0:45:31 GMT -5
-Basics- [/u][/i][/size][/center] Name: VG Age: He doesn't know. Gender: Male Species: not sure... Note: He doesn't remove his mask very often. -Appearance- [/b][/u][/i][/size] Coat color: Gray Eye color: White Size: Tall Build: A little wide, but mostly thin and tall. Description: He is a tall fellow, and a little strong looking. He always wears a robe that is the color black, it covers his entire body. He also is always wearing a blue mask and his eyes and mouth are white. The only part of his body that is visible are his hands, which are covered in gray fur. Picture: -Love- [/b][/i][/u][/size] Crushes: Mates/Spouse: Status: Preference: Guys -How I act- [/b][/i][/u][/size] Personality: He is mysterious, but happy. He is always smiling, and will usually have nice conversations with anyone. Although, he is also always up for a fight. Usual Mood: Happy. -What do I think of you?- [/b][/i][/u][/size] Everyone-Powers- [/b][/i][/u][/size] Powers: He has endless pockets. He also has some moderate magical ability, and an item that can be used in accordance with his mask to make him into an ethereal being for a short period of time. Weaknesses: If you took off his mask, he would probably be weakened. Skills: He is extremely thrifty and able to improvise and use weapons well usually. He can use all of the equipment he carries. He is a pretty decent chef. Items: He carries many diverse objects, from first aid to flair bar-tending supplies. He always has his trusty bowstaff and a few daggers. He may have some other weapons or useful things. It always comes down to luck. -Other information- [/b][/i][/u][/size] Favorite Color: Blue Voice: Sort of quiet, with a devious ring to it. Theme song: Handbags and Gladrags - Chase History: His adventures have led him through many places, giving him a lot of knowledge as well as equipment. After spending time in the forests that surround Cheshire City, he found the city on Google Earth and came because it looked fun. Player(s): vgmaster831
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May 22, 2009 11:31:38 GMT -5
Post by Varian on May 22, 2009 11:31:38 GMT -5
I'm going to have to deny this for a few reasons.
Even if your character is the mysterious sort you should still know what race, gender and the like they are and state it in the profile.
♠ is not an age. If he doesn't know how old he is please just say that.
Carrying and having the ability to use 'just about everything' is far too powerful an ability, everyone has limits. Now if he could say only use mundane items, no weapons or anything larger than say the palm of his hand I'd consider it a little longer but the vague state at the moment leaves it open for abuse.
Also please expand the history a little. We don't ask for much but we'd like to see a little more effort on seeing how your character belongs to this world and fits in.
Hopefully this doesn't sound too harsh, it's not supposed to be. I'm open to working out a way to include the purposed power, it just needs to be in a way that will be fair for anyone you may end up using it against.
On a final note, if this is a new race I have a race template that might help you better organise your thoughts on it and would greatly help us understand what you want to do with it.
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vgmaster831
The Lost
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VG
May 22, 2009 14:53:35 GMT -5
Post by vgmaster831 on May 22, 2009 14:53:35 GMT -5
First of all, the ♠ was a mistake... don't know how that happened. It was supposed to be a "?" question mark.
Also, as for the way he got here, he literally just walked into the city calmly during the night from... well he is basically a wanderer.
When I say he carries everything, I mean that he has a VERY wide variety of strange and exotic objects
When I say that he can use anything, I meant that he is very thrifty, and on his travels he has gathered many items and knows how to use them.
As for his race, I didn't know what it should be. The gray fur on his hands suggest a changeling or something, but I'm not sure.
Thank you for that, you were not harsh at all, just fair.
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May 23, 2009 21:17:47 GMT -5
Post by xxHuntressxx on May 23, 2009 21:17:47 GMT -5
There are plenty of explanations for his appearance. If you could think a bit on that and whip something up that would be great. He could be cursed, a witch, demon mix? And so forth. Could help to explain the magical pockets but please don't take the pocket thing to the extreme. What I am saying is like if someone got bit by a rattle snake, just don't magically happen to have the antidote in the pocket, or like a nuclear weapon during a fight. Smaller things are fine but yeah, not the grand solution unless it's like a need for say a paperclip or small box or something simple.
Also could you make a list of some of the main items he tends to carry in his pockets? That would help to give everyone a better idea of things about your character XP
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vgmaster831
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May 24, 2009 2:12:40 GMT -5
Post by vgmaster831 on May 24, 2009 2:12:40 GMT -5
I worked on it.
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May 24, 2009 13:05:45 GMT -5
Post by xxHuntressxx on May 24, 2009 13:05:45 GMT -5
I'm okaying to go ahead and rp, just keep everything good as far as powers go XP If things get out of hand someone will surely pm you telling you. Can't wait to see this guy in action :3
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vgmaster831
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May 24, 2009 21:14:55 GMT -5
Post by vgmaster831 on May 24, 2009 21:14:55 GMT -5
Trust me Huntress, I have been RPing for a while. I HATE POWERPLAYERS. When you see him in action, you will understand that the powers aren't actually as overpowered as they seem.
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vgmaster831
The Lost
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Jun 1, 2009 22:16:47 GMT -5
Post by vgmaster831 on Jun 1, 2009 22:16:47 GMT -5
THEME SONG!!
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